How Well Can You Articulate that Idea? Insights from Automated Formative Assessment

Automated methods are becoming increasingly used to support formative feedback on students’ science explanation writing. Most of this work addresses students’ responses to short answer questions. We investigate automated feedback on students’ science explanation essays, which discuss multiple ideas. Feedback is based on a rubric that identifies the main ideas students are prompted to include in explanatory essays about the physics of energy and mass. We have found that students revisions generally improve their essays. Here, we focus on two factors that affect the accuracy of the automated feedback. First, learned representations of the six main ideas in the rubric differ with respect to their distinctiveness from each other, and therefore the ability of automated methods to identify them in student essays. Second, sometimes a student’s statement lacks sufficient clarity for the automated tool to associate it more strongly with one of the main ideas above all others.